3rd Quarter Submission

My 3rd quarter submission has been revised to have music in the beginning to make it have more of an impact. This is to show that Bibi is in the rush and that she is currently panicking that she is running all the way across campus to seek help in finding her instrument. These scenes are long takes to emphasis how big and how long she is running across the campus.

I also cropped and cut out people that were in the shot that would distract from the main event of what is currently happening. I also got rid of the card game because it was only a second long which did not make an impact on the film. I also added myself into these shots because either one or both the actresses could not make it or they were on a time constraint.

Another revision I did was to have the dissolve transition from the title to the actual scene because it was to abrupt otherwise. This transition made it smoother which is more appealing to the eye then having it cut right then and there.

Revision 3

The last draft is the revised version of Bibi being dragged away from the kidnapper. It is in another direction which shows the difference between the longer drag and the shorter drag. These drags show that the kidnapping is short and sweet; that the kidnapper has experience. It is quick because does not want to be caught, so it is a faster operation. Also, was able to see Bibi and the kidnappers foot in the last video which needed to be revised. Going around the corner makes more of an impact because shows that Bibi has disappeared and that she gone before her friends could see the kidnapper.

This revision although small compared to the others makes it smoother for both parties involved. It allows for Bibi to walk a shorter distance in the angle which would be uncomfortable for her. It also shorter distance for Ethan to drag Bibi. It allows for the certain destination to be known instead of hiding behind another cement pillar.

Revision 2

The second revision will be at the end. The ending will be altered to give more context of what the two friends are going to do when they see the note. This would be a more realistic approach of what would happen when someone is missing. They would want to know if they should go to the authorities or if they should do an investigation on their own.

This ending will be the conflict of the film later on because they both are dealing on internal struggles of how to find their friend and who should be trusted or not. They must rely on each other to find their friend before the 48 hours are up and they will not be able to find their friend.

Another revision would be the over-the-shoulder shot of both Abby and Rebecca looking at the note. This will allow more of a dynamic because the audience will get to see what is written on the note to have the two actresses be baffled.

Revision 1

There were some complications on filming. Bibi cut her hair so I would not be able to use previous shots done. The scheduling was difficult because the actors had other prior engagements such as making up test, practices after school, or being sick. These filming re-shots took about 30 minutes. The filming had to be redone for several scenes because of the shakiness of hand or the blurriness of the picture taken.

The old version does not have the newly added scene before it. This revised version shows the new scenes of the film which helps improve the film due to being able to give more background knowledge of what is currently going on. It also gives more suspense to know that there is something dangerous lurking out there and that it needs to be found before it is too late.

Another revision is that of the location in which it will be taken in discussing the topic about recent unfortunate events of the missing instruments. Keara who is mentioned by Rebecca allows for more description of the recent happenings and how once the instruments are stolen then themselves. This allows for suspense because the audience knows what has happened but the actresses do not know. I will dismiss the claims because I would be the sensible one of the group and thinking innocently that nothing nefarious has happened to my friend when that certainly is not the case.